Reflective log – Week 7 – Process of script writing and research (FMP)

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The changes that have been made would be the actions. For example ‘ALEX stays silent’ had been changed to ‘ALEX stays silent, defiant. Other changes would include would be how the line is delivered and what the line is itself. For example ‘You could at least try and do something’ has been changed to ‘[Getting Angrier] You could at least try and SAY or DO something. These changes make the characters dialogue more powerful and it adds dynamic to the characters.

I also did research on Calke Abbey which is where Alex’s mother worked. Most of this research was about the house and the process of cleaning the house ready to open again. Alex also works at Calke Abbey as she is studying art history at college